Writing Help: comma splicing and simultaneous action

[D C Shaftoe]

Help!

I'm looking for some writing advice. In my most recent editorial evaluation, I was told that simultaneous action and comma splicing interfere with the ability to form a strong book. Can anyone give me guidance on what exactly that means and how to correct it?

Thanks.

[Carolyn Howard-Johnson]

Think it would be better if you "only" said, "I am creative."  "I can do it."  (-: 

 

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[D C Shaftoe]

http://http://www.ehow.com/how_2216315_correct-comma-splice.html

I found this link on comma splicing. It was handy.

[D C Shaftoe]

Thank you.

 

[Janice Hermsen]

Here's a link to a blog that might give you some insight:  http://www.book-editing-services.com/blog/english-editing/when-not-...

 

[Janice Hermsen]